高二英语怎样写好作文



Lecturer:Yang Aiqin From No.4 Middle School In Minqin Gansu

  1.Theme: an article that appeals to readers’ emotion
  2. Writing skills: Use exact adjectives, good verbs and proper phrases. Use some effective conjunctions. Use different sentence structures。
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Common mistakes Writing Secure code Exercises for Writing tips & Strategies
Common mistakes
Situational writing: (20\%)
假设你是李平, 假设你是李平,最近参加了某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比 赛并获奖,该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次夏令营活动, 赛并获奖,该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次夏令营活动,现 就有关事项征求你的意见, 就有关事项征求你的意见,请根据下表所提供的信息用英语以书 信的形式给予答复。 信的形式给予答复。 活动时间 7月15?22 或8 月15?22 月 参加英语角 活动内容 听英语讲座 看英语电影 学唱英语歌曲 表演英语短剧 教外宾学中文
对活动内容的建议或要求 注意: 注意:
  1.词数 100左右
  2.选出你喜欢的时间及两项活动并提一项建议 词数:
  1.词数:100左右
  2.选出你喜欢的时间及两项活动并提一项建议
Situational writing: (20\%)
A student’s composition:
Dear Sir or Madame, Thank you for inviting me to the English summer camp. invite we July I think you can hold it in June so that our students can have time to get ready for the new term. For me, I’d like to to ready listen the English lectures. Doingthat will enlarge our Do that attend knowledge I also hope I can join in the English Corner so I knowlege. join and the foreign teacher canspeak English with each other. I foriegner teacher talk think I can improve my spoken English by communicate speaking English communicating native with him because my English teacher is not a trueborn Englishman. And I think you can organize some sports have games, such as playing volleyball, going swimming. I very like play valleyball, go advice sports. I hope you can agree my advices . to adopt Yours truly, Li Ping (106 words)
Sample:
Dear Sir or Madame, I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in July because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture. It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp? Thank you very much. Yours truly, Li Ping
Dear Sir or Madame, Sample I’m very glad to be invited to the English summer camp. I prefer to go in July because I’ll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I’d like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the coming of the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture. It’s been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp? Thank you very much. Yours truly, Li ping
Dear Sir or Madame, Thank you for inviting me to the English summer camp. I think you can hold it in July so that we can have time to get ready for the new term. For me, I’d like to attend the English lectures. Doing that will enlarge our knowledge. I also hope I can join in the English corner so I and the foreign teacher can speak English with each other I think can improve my spoken English by communicating with him because my English teacher is not a native Englishman. And I think you can organize some sports games, such as playing volleyball, going swimming. I like sports. I hope you can adopt my advice. Yours truly, Li ping
Common problems:

  1. The passage is wordy.
I also hope I can join the English Corner so I and foriegner teacher can talk English with each other. I think I can improve speaking English by communicate with him because my English teacher is not a trueborn Englishman. ( 40 words) I’d like to attend the English Corner so I can communicate with others in English. In this way, I hope to improve my spoken English. ( 25words)
Common problems:

  2.Thinking in Chinese and writing in Chinglish (no effective conjunctions) eg: For me, I’d like to attend the English lectures. Doing that will enlarge our knowledge. As to me,I’d like to attend the English lectures because it can enlarge our knowledge by listening to more lectures. I like sports. I hope you can adopt my advice. I like sports very much, so I hope you can adopt my advice.
(I) Improve the wordy sentence
  1.I like to learn to sing English songs better.
(prefer)

  2. We also help people from other countries to learn Chinese. foreigners
  3.In the not too far future, our dreams will come true. (near)
  4.We will have the party in the garden which is on the top of the main building. (We will have the party in the garden on the top of the main building.)
  5.I also like to go to places where we can learn more about culture of old China in Beijing. I also like to go to more places of interest in Beijing.

  6. The gifts should be wrapped up and a few words of best wishes should be written on them by you. You should wrap up the gifts and write a few words of best wishes on them
  7. Next the text will be gone through by us and then the main idea will be found. Next, let’s go through the text and find the main idea.
Summary :
Change phrases into single words Change unnecessary clauses into phrases Change useless passive into active
(II)Improve the sentence in Chinglish
  1. In my opinion, we should communicate in English. In order that, we should invite some foreigner students joining us. In my opinion, we should invite some foreigners so that we can communicate with them in English.
  2.You can let some foreigners with us. We can learn something from each other. You can invite some foreigners so we can learn something from each other.
  3. Because we are learning of English, English knowledge is the more the better for us. The more we learn, the better we will be in learning English.
Tips and strategies
Tip 1:
On words and sentences
Words:
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Never make up new words on your own. Sentences: Never translate word by word Use fewer words to express clearly Do use some conjunctions
Tip 2:Remember useful expressions: useful expressions
表示顺序, 动作过程: 表示顺序 动作过程:first, firstly, first of all, second, secondly, at first, at last, next. . 表示转折: 表示转折 but, yet, or, however, nevertheless, although, 表示结果: 表示结果 thus, therefore, so, as a result… 表示并列: 表示并列 and, also, as well as, and then 表示递进: 表示递进 besides, what’s more, moreover, in addition, what is worse, worse still… 表列举: 表列举 for example/for instance, that is to say,… 表原因: 表原因 because of, thanks to, due to, owing to,… 表示比较:on (the) one hand,…on the other hand,… 表示比较 表示总结: in short, in a word, in general, 表示总结
(III)Improve the passage:
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Tom is four years old and he is energetic. One day a bike was given to him. The bike is new and it is light blue in color. Tom received the bike for his birthday. He struggled to ride his bike. He struggled for two hours. However, he was unsuccessful in riding the bike. Four-year-old Tom is energetic. One day, he got a light blue bike for his birthday. Though he struggled for two hours to ride it, he was unsuccessful.
Exercises for writing
Writing:
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  05(重庆卷) 20
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毕业前夕,你班讨论给李老师送一份礼物,大家提 毕业前夕,你班讨论给李老师送一份礼物, 出两条建议: 出两条建议: 里面有每一位同学的照片; (
  1)送影集 ( album ), 里面有每一位同学的照片; 送磁带,录有每个同学对老师的祝福. (
  2)送磁带,录有每个同学对老师的祝福. 请写短文简述班级的讨论,然后表明你自己的意见, 请写短文简述班级的讨论,然后表明你自己的意见, 并说明理由。 并说明理由。 注意: 注意:
  1. 100 字左右
  2. 用第一人称写
Discussion: What kind of gift shall we give to our teachers before our graduation? Why?
I like… I prefer…
Gift
an album a tape the report of enrollment (录取通知书 录取通知书) 录取通知书 other useful gifts ……
Reasons
in memory of the happy time remember all of the students with a tape-recording sending our wishes to …… express thanks to show our love for the teacher practical ……
… …
Tip 3: Follow typical patterns Write a passage about my view We had on…… a heated discussion about/on ...….
Students’ views/ideas/opinions on it vary/differ from person to person. Some students say / think / believe that… However, others hold the view that…… As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the first/second view./ I would like to ….The reasons are as follows. First, …… Secondly,…… In conclusion / In a word ,……
Homework
  1.Write the passage
  2.Remember useful expressions and typical patterns.
Wonderful sentences:
The place was shabby. In the hall below was a mailbox into which no letter would go. There was an electric bell that did not work,… The description is vivid so it seems as if we could see the scene really. She stood by the window and looked out at a grey cat walking along a grey fence in a grey backyard. …… Three adjectives show that she was upset and depressed at that time.

  1.Theme: an article that appeals to readers’ emotion
  2. Writing skills: Use exact adjectives, good verbs and proper phrases. Use some effective conjunctions. Use different sentence structures.
 

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